Teacher and peers review so far:

Teacher and peers review so far:

Checklist of what to improve on: (teacher)

• Add in the shots of the doll (and fast cuts of i.e: hand, feet, arm, body, legs), perhaps use shot reverse shot, match on actions 

• Sync the times on the clocks to 8:10am

• Use a more non diegetic sound - sound effect of an alarm clock

• Add some slide transitions (mainly at the start and end of the sequence)

• Insert the film title 'Innosense'

• Make sure that there is cross cutting (shot of the female character, then the antagonist/the doll)

Checklist of what to improve on: (peers)

• Good use of credits and creative indent.

• Good use of camera angles and shots to illustrate thriller components.

• Suspense takes to long to come in certain shots. Fluctuating suspense.

• Music stops in certain places makes it hard to create a suspenseful atmosphere