Edit feedback and review:

Edit feedback and review:

Whilst editing today our group got feedback based upon the footage that we had and what we had edited. We were informed that of the footage we had, some of the shots, we very good and conveyed what we wanted to illustrate from our thriller. However we were told to re-organise where we had positioned certain shots as it was repetitive of just one character. So we have now got a shot of the female character then followed by a shot of the villain who is targeting her. We are doing this to add more of a sense of enigma as well as to show the audience a strong contrast between the female victim and her male tormentor.

To further signify our story and plot we are going to have split second embeddings of the dolls face as our thriller is focused around the idea of voodoo. The immediate pop up of the doll will confuse the audience and give a sense of enigma. However as the sequence progresses the audience will find out how the doll is linked to the female character and how they both tie in with the male antagonist. This is our progress so far of our editing of our opening sequence